Beside a lot of advantages some people believe that the internet creates many problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

One of the technology which has been in use by people for the past few years is the internet. Some people think that despite all the benefits of the internet there are still more drawbacks. I believe that the benefits cannot be underestimated and the merits outweighs the demerits.

To start with,truly there are few drawbacks of the internet as the youths of nowadays now abuse the internet. Firstly, the youth are seen not to be serious with their career,they are seen to be busy with the internet during unnecessary acts such as yahoo,watching pornographic films, cheating people via the interne...

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One of the technology
One of the technologies

the merits outweighs the demerits.
the merits outweigh the demerits.

the internet has helped students that is undergraduates,graduates,post graduates
the internet has helped students who are undergraduates,graduates,post graduates

to find their assignment very easy.
to find their assignment very easily.

the merits of the internet outweighs the demerits
the merits of the internet outweigh the demerits

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More sentences varieties wanted. Look, a lot of sentences start with subject 'they' for example

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