The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise to what extent do you agree or disagree
The most effective method is developing and improving is health is considered to the daily exercise. However, I believe that not only exercise but also other aspects which help to improve the health.
There are multifarious activities which plays a vital role to maintainingthe health. Firstly, due to the exercise people become more fit and healthier.As a person doing every day physical activities he or she gives a great deal of benefits First of all, it help to increase the blood circulation as well body become flexible. Second of all, people make more active and the level of work power will be incline For example, every one gives highly preference to the Gym because now a days, most of the people are like to go to there and doing lot of body exercises.
On the other hand, some cherished food help to maintain the level of health such as a nutritionist food.This food fill with all types of vitamins and help to rising the deficiency fo food. While , some foods like a junk food it create a bad effect on body and should avoid these things by the people. Moreover , drinking water in a significant amount because it help to remove all wate material from the body.
By epitomising, exercise is a highly recommend by the people but it can not be neglected the other sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69469026549 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62227522039 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5872779347 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.888888889 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2222222222 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116868222931 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521122552462 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417045528388 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075984051705 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536649015726 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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