So serious are youth crimes happening, that people cannot turn a deaf ear to it anymore. To cope with the situation, some people assume that educating parents with parental skills is the best option to limit youth crimes. In my viewpoint, I partly agree with this statement because it is right but not enough.
On one hand, I agree with the above opinion because of two crucial reasons. First, it is widely accepted that children are blank sheets of paper. Admittedly, they are affected significantly by their parents before they communicate more with society. In this period, parents can guide and educate their children the basic rules to become a good person in the future. Lack of proper knowledge, parents may let their children be a part of youth crimes. Second, children tend to imitate adults. As a result, if parents are not educated with parental skills, they may behave in a wrong way towards the others, which allows children to have the same behaviour and become crimes.
On the other hand, parents are not the only factor influencing to children's growth. When children have awareness of people surrounding them, they can change change remarkably their characteristics because of their neighbours, friends, and curiousness. It is too dangerous for children keep away from social evils if the listed features always give them chances to do bad things.
In conclusion, youth crimes have become increasingly alarming and aroused people's concern. Nevertheless, education on parents with parental skill is not the best and the only solution we can take. Obviously, everyone in the world has to take strong actions to prevent and protect children from youth crimes.
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. 78
- Many university students live with their families while others need to live to live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations. 73
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The illustrations below show how coffee is sometimes produce. 78
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d with parental skills, they may behave in a wrong way towards the others, which allows childr...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: change
...ss of people surrounding them, they can change change remarkably their characteristics becaus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62473926293 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5540789922 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353191827895 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113250593543 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960225254282 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220681543165 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899542890256 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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