The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people agree that traffic and pollution issues would be best tackled by higher prices of gas.While I accept this policy to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are more reasonable alternatives.

On the one hand, raising the prices of fuel will directly discourage the utilization of private vehicles and promote the popularity of public transports.As a result, less emission will be released into the atmosphere. The process of air pollution and global warming will also be impeded. Additionally, due to higher cost of gasoline, the citizens might have to use it efficiently and economically. For example, during cold seasons, the Europeans will learn how to cope with the weather and turn on the heater when necessary. Most importantly, the price of fuel is proportionate to higher cost of production. This also means inhabitants in poverty-stricken countries, may have to struggle with more expensive goods.

On the other hand, there are better methods than forcing people to spend more money. The governments should invest greatly on conducting research and developing technology to use renewable energy resources including wind, solar and tidal energy instead of conventional resources.Therefore less damage will be done to our environment and the quality of life will improve considerably.

In conclusion, it is not always necessary to increase the cost of energy, especially fuel, I believe there are more effective ways to protect our surroundings.

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Average: 8.5 (3 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...be best tackled by higher prices of gas.While I accept this policy to some extent, I ...
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Suggestion: As
...ote the popularity of public transports.As a result, less emission will be release...
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... in poverty-stricken countries, may have to struggle with more expensive goods. ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...nergy instead of conventional resources.Therefore less damage will be done to our environ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nergy instead of conventional resources.Therefore less damage will be done to our environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3991416309 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17055565206 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62660944206 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0686991579 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.8 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13394776054 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489082555348 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507786134839 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847723813966 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556714711388 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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