The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The best method to developing collaboration among student at scholl by team sports. I completely disagree with this statement because a lot of way to establishment solidarity in pupilselve.
First of all, creating concern between student through team sport not a effective option. On the other hand, through this way only can show cooperate at some moment but can't in a long time if the situation was finished they will back like commonly. Consequantly, the collaboration will be limited because basically for establish togetherness should be put communication in the first place in life. For instance, several education center have extracurricular that is in varieties of sports and many student interet to join that club, ultimately formed one group for do anything about that course like join competition or do exercise, and from that habits they are start to know each other and often we look there was a debate until one of the them decide to out group or not cohesive among of them. That's why option of sport organization is not the best method because that is only shape cooperating at spesific time.
Secondly, Frequent arguments due to differences of opinion. Sometimes in some group they are only thinking about their self and not carring about their friends. In other word, they want to showing their ability and want to beating every single person in the same group, whereas they want the teacher only focus about their self. For example, i was join basket comunity since 2017 and to be honest my friends is not nice because majority of them is selfish, they always fighting with each other to the point of physical play as a result of which some were injured and fell down, this case occur because they want to be a good person and feel only their selve can be the best player. Thus, sports communities have a lot of effect and making member often disagree.
To conclude, for shapping cooperating between a child shold be found another alternative besides put they are in one group.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... between student through team sport not a effective option. On the other hand, th...
^
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y can show cooperate at some moment but cant in a long time if the situation was fin...
^^^^
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...ular that is in varieties of sports and many student interet to join that club, ultimately f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 738, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...we look there was a debate until one of the them decide to out group or not cohesive amo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 798, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ut group or not cohesive among of them. Thats why option of sport organization is not...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly focus about their self. For example, i was join basket comunity since 2017 and...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86217008798 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62447451148 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.346618214 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137543521794 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588024511103 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562519223344 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943306655548 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685402148523 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... between student through team sport not a effective option. On the other hand, th...
^
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y can show cooperate at some moment but cant in a long time if the situation was fin...
^^^^
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...ular that is in varieties of sports and many student interet to join that club, ultimately f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 738, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...we look there was a debate until one of the them decide to out group or not cohesive amo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 798, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ut group or not cohesive among of them. Thats why option of sport organization is not...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly focus about their self. For example, i was join basket comunity since 2017 and...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86217008798 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62447451148 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.346618214 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137543521794 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588024511103 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562519223344 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943306655548 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685402148523 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.