The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Child education is receiving more and more concerns as society developed. Several opinions claimed that provoking team-building sports among children could be advantageous. I totally approved that this could be immensely beneficial for young individual.
However, sportsmanship endorsement has witnessed many opposite thoughts as it becomes popular, mainly from the over-concerning parents. These people claimed that sports could be hazardous for their kids since those activities are physically intensive. In addition to this, some even believed participating in sports could distracts students from focusing learning.
Having said that, I strongly content with endorsing sports in general education. Firstly, taking part in physical activities would make students become more active apparently and mentally. Secondly, having every student’s involvement widely will help discovering many hidden or unpolished athletes in classes. Moreover, the pre-built teamwork acquired by youngsters alleviates their career paths since more and more professions require this qualification.
To conclude, though school sports could be hindered by few people, I assert that the pros will outweigh the cons. To integrate sports into schools is to generate opportunities for potential talents and well-prepare students for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'distract'
Suggestion: distract
... believed participating in sports could distracts students from focusing learning. Ha...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to discover' or 'discover'.
Suggestion: to discover; discover
... student’s involvement widely will help discovering many hidden or unpolished athletes in c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18378378378 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02188752879 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718918918919 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5256629786 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814770838261 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312152821822 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380857374317 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542410052457 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300511366428 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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