Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
Answer :
Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
The first thing in job is salary not job satisfaction. I am partly agree with this statement.
As I am consider people should find job which is satisfies their souls. When you work in a company where you can feel convenient, you could be more successful, too. You can start your job with small steps, but if you like it, you can develop your business till you feel yourself satisfied. So, I think when you satisfied with your job you probably can get more salary.
But there are people who are need to work in places where they are not satisfied. They were agree for this inconvenience becouse they need money. For instance it can be students which are study in foreign countries. They need to feed up themselves, so they will search job with large salary.
In conclusion I wanted to say that people should not seek job with big salary, they should find job in which they are satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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The first thing in job is salary not job...
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...alary not job satisfaction. I am partly agree with this statement. As I am con...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... I am partly agree with this statement. As I am consider people should find job wh...
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... am partly agree with this statement. As I am consider people should find job ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...job you probably can get more salary. But there are people who are need to wor...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...more salary. But there are people who are need to work in places where they are n...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...where they are not satisfied. They were agree for this inconvenience becouse they nee...
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...ey will search job with large salary. In conclusion I wanted to say that peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52795031056 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40888111555 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8325824116 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19969581071 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825831844834 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624136214954 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12440753149 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627673683343 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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