It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with a high wage, even if it does not appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with the given notion and think that job satisfaction is highly important than salary. In the following essay, I will support my opinion with clear examples.
First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high salary but feels tensed, depressed or compromises with the family time then he or she can not enjoy his or her life. While pursuing one's interests will bring pleasure and a feeling of satisfaction. For example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices, not because of appealing wages but because they were really passionate about science. That is why it is more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy.
Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore leads to career growth. In other words, there a strong relationship between job satisfaction and productivity. Those who love their jobs can excel in their field of work and produce better results than those who put salary first. Take Mahendra Singh Dhoni as an example, he quit his government job in the early age of life to follow his passion for cricket and became the most successful captain of the Indian cricket team. Moreover, he is the only skipper in the world who has won all the ICC championship trophies so motivation keeps you going to achieve what makes you happy.
To recapitulate, I personally believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than a high salary because it keeps people and happy and motivated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... enjoy his or her life. While pursuing ones interests will bring pleasure and a fee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79725085911 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69573118391 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0932431429 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20953130306 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720135691609 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547634707528 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132610562147 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215466222732 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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