Billions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Instead, this money could be used to improve living conditions of people on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is beyond question that a huge sum of money is spent on space exploration programs every year. Some people regard it as a waste of funds, since they believe that amount could be invested to upgrade the standards of living for citizens on Earth instead. From my point of view, while space research plays a certain key to the development of mankind, it should not take the priority over other pressing problems facing people daily.
On the one hand, space exploration paves the way for mankind’s long-term existence. Due to the rapid growth of global population, natural resources would soon run out and there would not be enough room for all habitants on Earth, which necessitates the need to find new homeland capable of sustaining human life. Furthermore, human space exploration contributes significantly to the development of various advanced technologies that feed back into the economy and improve people’s lives on Earth. Without space programs, people would not have GPS or accurate weather prediction.
On the other hand, there are innumerable serious issues that require financial support from the government. One current alarming problem is poverty. According to the World Bank, 689 million people are living in extreme poverty with less than $1.9 per day. Therefore, it is urgent that money be expended to provide people with essentials such as clean water and food. What’s more, other spheres such as education, health care and climate change are also in need of pecuniary resources. Government should pay scrupulous attention to those fields in order that human life can sustain until a new planet is successfully detected.
In conclusion, although I acknowledge that the expenditure on space exploration is of enormous benefits, the precedence should be serious matters that human are now encountering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26369863014 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80819203128 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7023969573 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222318351874 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066995657006 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579993187643 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123806706068 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731579942904 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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