Biotechnology companies all over the world are developing different types of genetically modified (GM) crops. However, not enough is known about the effects of these crops on our health and on environment. Inferring with nature in this way should be prohibited. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Varieties of genetically modified crops are being cultivated through bio-tech corporations around the global, while the influence which exert remains uncertain to the public. Under this circumstance, I hold the opinion that companies or industries related to nature oughtn't to gain profit out of it.
general belief is that technologies devoted to modifying crops serve the demand of our mankind. Due to the rapid increase of population, higher food storage, better quality and various shapes of food are required. over the past few decades, majority of people in africa and other deprived regions have been suffering from hunger while ironically in some developed areas a significant amount of waste can be seen in food. Throwing away unwanted food has become so common that this phenomenon has led to imbalance of food distribution, which is also partially owing to the disability of growing plants in certain drought places in africa. Thus, biotechnology is able to get involved in recycling wasted food and searching way to develop farmland. In addition to above examples, gm crops make possible for vegetarians to enjoy the taste of meat when having different types of vegetables, similar to which, people are likely to discover more dishes in the progress of adjusting the structures of crops.
however, we can not rest assure with the possible health issues the transgenic food might bring about. Not long ago, a heated debate over the matter of genetically modified milk powder has aroused public concern, the effect of which has generated damaging impact on babies' brain. Notwithstanding, the firm that provided milk powder had gain huge margin. From this case, we can learn that there remains a load of risk of these biologically related products. Without being completely authorized by the officials and sufficient evidences to prove its authentic effect, bio-tech companies should be forbidden to benefit from the public by offering transgenic products. And the fund and facilities for research, on the other hand, ought to be supported by the states to stimulate the development.
Overall, we can not neglect the revelatory influence of gm crops. however governments have obligation to supervise and encourage relevant industries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83752171066 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8657710499 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238527394326 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615340284843 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386589404835 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116891306358 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422475727125 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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