Nowadays, technology has improved and crops are genetically modified due to biotechnology companies. Human can get any type of food easily. Some people reckon that it should be restrict, but I agree with this statment. This essay will discuss both the aspects in upcoming paragraphs.
To start with, it is harmful for human's health because many crops are polished and their nutiritions value also reduced. Moreover, it effects to economy because if all crops are genetically will grow in one nation, it will affect the trade of the economy. However, it can reduce the cost if there are number of crops grow that price will be decrease and it directly minimise the cost. Additionally, when any product genetically modified at that time contain lots of chamical in this and it is causes of many diseases like high blood pressure, allergen and so on. For example, the national centre health, conducted a survey in American, there was percentage of children with food allergen raised from 2.4% to 5.1% during geneticall modified popular.
On the flip side, some say it should not be banned because the demands of individual is fulfill through this process and there are some crops which is need to reproduce and it is possible by geneticall modified. Furthermore, people enjoyed food in unconventional session and it also provide food when the crops destroyed due to climate change. Although, human has a busy schdule they do not have enough time to make food yourself. So, that is easy way to purchase something prepared.
In conclusion, I think it is playing with masses life because we can not ignore hunam's health. To save the environment as well as health it should be banned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'restricted'?
Suggestion: restricted
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Message: Did you mean 'minimises'?
Suggestion: minimises
... price will be decrease and it directly minimise the cost. Additionally, when any produc...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fulfilled'.
Suggestion: fulfilled
...ed because the demands of individual is fulfill through this process and there are some...
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...d in unconventional session and it also provide food when the crops destroyed due to cl...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... crops destroyed due to climate change. Although, human has a busy schdule they do not h...
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Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...have enough time to make food yourself. So, that is easy way to purchase something prepa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96113074205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66181660521 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4458177088 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228453760397 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071918515788 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373585650732 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135523354469 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369668378413 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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