Blood sports have became a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this world, everyone has right to live whether they are humanbeing or whether they are animals. In today’s era, blood sports has becoming the burning question. In this essay, I will analyse that why blood sports should be banned?
To start with, if we spot a light on issue that how much animals are suffer due to the blood sports. Broadly speaking, we cannot imagine the things which are done with animals. The first and foremost, reason is that animals are forcefully trained by their trainers. This is a training in which trainers did not think about how much animal face a problem. They just kept one thing in their mind that they are converted the animal into the form of beast. Aside from this, the trainers are again doing reckless thing. Trainers forcefully participated their animals in the blood games by forgetting that the animals may have chane to die. Moreover, some animals are on the stage of extinction. So, these games may be make their species extinct. The best epitome is that, there had been a survey conducted by hindustan times in that survey they conclude that blood sports leads the extinction of species.
No doubt, most of people think that these types of games are the source of entertainment. They spend lot of money for watching them but, also we cannot negligible the downside of this fun. The person forget that blood related sports can put great impact on their offspring. By watching these agressive games on daily routine their children may become more agressive. In the “nick of time”, this leads their behaviour on another level. Futhermore, that type of children cannot handle himself or herself. They always want to do fight with their parents as well as in society which they live. The outcome of this problem, is that these type of children are not easily to do focus on their study or on their future goals. With the passage of time, they cannot do proper study. By this the level of children decrease ,and it will decrease continuously day by day.
In the crux, animals are one of the beautiful creation of god. Well, i strongly believe that global government firstly, spread some awareness reagarding blood sports among all over the world ,and also make some stringent law that these types of games should be banned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, broadly speaking, no doubt, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82188295165 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36109830464 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5207159828 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.72 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161025013366 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481340485912 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524424262515 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118232097125 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369394652755 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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