It is often argued that the government should finance in fundamental issues in society or to protect animals and their habitat.this essay agrees with the above mentioned statement and will discuss the positives of the conception.in this essay I will explore the supporting details with examples in siding my opinion and end with a reasoned conclusion.
There are numerous reasons to strengthen my opinion . government by funding on basic issues of society like education,poverty and health leads to a profound positive changes in society.Many people are not owning houses ,firstly the government should shed some income on such things that would help them in their wellbeing.For instance by educating the people on aspects like protecting the natural resources like forests, water and soil.The management should also develop the knowledge of plantation and protecting them. which indirectly helps the animals for their livelihood and also provides food sources for nourishing.
In addition to the aforementioned details concerning public health is also the major responsibility of the respective wing authorities .now a days people life expectancy is extremely decreased . so introducing primary health care centers guides the people in owning a splendid health .it is clearly evident that these two reasons along with supporting details and examples solidly fortify the argument in favour of my opinion
To conclude that the government should allocate large amount of investment on the society's fundamental problems .I think that making people wise and knowledgeable will also enhance the lives of animals.
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. 84
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 78
- Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by the local farmers. Would the advantages of 78
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57551020408 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00859025715 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.746416415 49.4020404114 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.666666667 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.8333333333 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152688672243 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666579039096 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712491772553 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952454844974 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726518987567 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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