Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The debate about whether boxing should be prohibited due to its violent, gory nature, or should still be categorised as a sport poses great controversy in the modern time. Although some would argue that boxing encompasses sufficient elements to be declared a sport, I do not hold the same view
To begin, most boxing programs are often broadcasted on TV, which means that children are at risk of exposure to inappropriate content at an early age. As a result, this may have an adverse effect on their growth and mindset development, for example the drama of Mike Tyson. Furthermore, because boxing often involves brutal actions, showcasing the sport on TV could be seen as an attempt to promote violence on a large scale. In addition, boxing itself is a highly unstable job for boxers themselves since it is likely that they would suffer permanent damage which could cost them their whole career and even their whole future.
On the other hand, it is understandable that boxing has long been accepted as a sport because of the rigorous training sessions a boxer has to undergo and because of its entertainment value. Boxing is also a big sport industry, therefore, the salary of professional boxers are usually high enough to outweigh the potential dangers.
In conclusion, even though watching a boxing match seems to be entertaining, I strongly agree that the sport is immoral and outdated in the modern time, therefore should be prohibited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
The debate as to whether boxing should be prohibited due to its ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01652892562 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81641203731 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623966942149 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3647875573 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.75 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.875 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205219627681 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851253417577 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258151721646 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111157703837 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312201341863 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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