The world has been doing such extraodinary things over the last two decades. There are arguments between people to opt a major contributing the most to the global evolvement, one of which is medical science that is considered to gain the most outstanding achievements.
In terms of the breakthroughs around the world in this latest 200 years, we have witnessed the worldwide development in many aspects, from mathematics with hundreds of thousands of equations being created to the inventions of various useful tools or applications in physics in order to make our life as modern and convenient as it is right now. As a result, there are plenty of factors constructing this joint civilization, not merely medical science.
However, when it comes to picking up one by far the most significant advances, medical science deserves to lead the top. It has been proven during this panic period of COVID - 19 pandernic occuring globally, which is evaluated as the most severe catastrophy in the history that causes the deaths of residents in most of countries with unbelievable numbers of victims. Imaging that without the production of vaccines made by efforts of medical science, how worse the situation would continually be? Vaccines have lessened the risk of virus spreading in our body and creating immunity against it as well. It saves lives of people around the world, though this circumstance has just happened for the last current 3 years.
In conclusion, I assume that medical science has completed an overwhelming mission to save the world towards the hazardous pandemic, which outweighs the feats in other fields.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010 78
- The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison 84
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the cases What can be done this problem 89
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
... that causes the deaths of residents in most of countries with unbelievable numbers of victims. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14015151515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88878707759 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5425044734 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.7 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223638582788 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831417856457 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674824395256 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129716509116 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692457393954 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.