Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
for years, bullying in schools has been a major source of concern from students, teachers and perants alike, and has been for a long time, this essay will discuss the issue of bullying and school harrasment, the possible causes and solutions of this troubling issue.
bullying is, in its core, a type of agreesive behavior caused by students to other students, while most kinds of bullying were nothing short of teases and insults, it has reached far more dangerous and even lethal levels, and even minor bullying has terrible mental effects on the target, causing self-esstem and trust issues.
there have been many reasons for bullying, especially school bullying, most bullies had a history of being a target of bullying themselves, causing a feeling of insecurity and fear that could be temporarily suppresed by bullying other students, showing others that they are not a viable target for bullying due to their strengh of character, other reasons include the increase in violent media that is shown to children and teenagers, potental abuse or neglect causing metal issues that could lead to bullying, Jealousy and attention-seeking, Lack of emotional and psychological security, and many many other reasons.
many solutions have been suggested to end, or at least supress, bullying in schools, one common soultions is through displine, other soultions to the bullying issue include, teaching students from a young age about bullying and what to do when you see a bully, creating campaigns to increase public awareness about bullying and discorage students from it, however, i suggest targeting the root of the issue, by invensting in public mental healthcare for children, fostering a cooperative enviroment in schools instead of a competitive one, and make a hardline stance aginest bullying
for a personal experience, i have been bullied in my school, and i have advocated for the aformentioned suggrestions in my schools until they were finally accepted, which worked, causing a better school enviroment and less bullying
finally, i want to say, bullying and genreal harrasment in educational enviroments has been a major issue for a long time, and now is the time for it to be in the trashbin of history
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21448467967 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83135540478 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540389972145 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 20.2975951904 438% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 292.144976852 49.4020404114 591% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 468.0 106.682146367 439% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.75 20.7667163134 432% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239220534995 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145225894489 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524269870506 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123334271559 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500445097484 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.0 13.0946893788 367% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.86 50.2224549098 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 11.3001002004 336% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.23 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 9.78957915832 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.1190380762 372% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 38.0 10.7795591182 353% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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