Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?
t is inevitable fact that criminals are threat for any society and they should be kept in prisons. However, some people are of the opinion that not all offenders deserves imprisonment and they should be permitted to do unpaid work for betterment of community. In my point of view, it is better to use manpower rather than keeping them behind bars.
Some people would argue that it is better to put law abiding citizens in jails because, either big or small a crime is a crime and one should be punished for committing it. Sinners are rather unpredictable, granting them permission to do any type of unpaid work will not only endanger the safety of living in a country but it will also decrease sense of regret in criminals, as this technique could be very sympathetic. Giving punishment to such people is very important for maintaining balance in the society and it will discourage them to commit crime in the future.
Yet, I strongly believe that not every criminal deserves imprisonment. Prisoners who are not serious offenders can add excellent value towards the development of society and giving them a chance to work and gain new skills is very important for their personal development as well. Work of any kind can be beneficial for them in the long run, after finishing the period of the punishments this will give them a prospect to be respectable citizen of the country again.
Overall, I believe while criminals are annoying and danger for society they surely contribute to improvement of community. I hope in future lawmakers will make up law for this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: T
t is inevitable fact that criminals are t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82527881041 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74068725325 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8924622907 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184330368479 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742080583698 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834553493849 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117164831058 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824186956694 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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