Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays , many people have argued about conserving a traditional methods in life. Although , there are conflicts in the variability of chilling the traditional culture. Personally speaking, despite both arguments, I would lean towards the latter.
On one side of the arguments, Supporters for region and country ancient traditions and cultures as considered crucial than all around the globe. While, each country has its people and knowledge that must be protected as unique and opposed from foreigners. For instance, it is suggested teaching ancient history and country’s celebration in school curriculum .Furthermore ,the traditional way which is valuable and have to be conserved. As, celebrating the national days of the country .
As far as anyone knows, some people, that are passionate about this issue, are considered in curious about traditional ways and cultures. Inspite of the dominance of the ancient culture, people have been influenced by globalization .As an example, technology affected the junior generation extremely in their leisure time when compared with the elderly ones. Moreover, imitating the foreigners such as in listening to modern songs and music like pop and jazz style than oldish ones .In addition, tireless and rapid life prevent from family gathering and ceremonies as belated.
In conclusion,inspite of the fact that people are affected by various culturesand mentalities and also the turning off by technology that was seen as time wasting ,and also reduce the importance of cultures in regions and countries.On the other side , modernization that is spread globally .In my perception,it is vital to maintain our region myth .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55294117647 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07120622758 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662745098039 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0074177707 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245864523623 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836134799646 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463456902626 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137297760152 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286059043184 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.