Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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These days, the vast majority thinks that innovation is frequently motivated by the desire for profit and economic advancement, without innovation we would not have achieved what we call progress today. Businesses, especially those in the field of science and technology, are constantly innovating. However, some argue that it should prioritize social and environmental issues to be the primary objective of innovation. This essay will discuss both views.
To begin with, nowadays most of people are with that innovation is essential for motivating and pushing profits, investments, and development. Governments have always supported innovation in order to raise productivity in economic plans and also to gain more profit. For example, governments always give subsidies to companies which support startups and young inventors, so in the future this will encourages businesses and entrepreneurs more to take risks and explore new ideas, leading to the creation of innovative products and services, leading to economic growth. In addition, because of that economic growth their will be more job offers, so more motivation and support for individuals will be provided and higher standards of living.
On the other hand, some people are strongly against this. Their debate is that innovative ideas should be developed in order to untangle social and environmental matters. Despite all the improvements that could happen as a result from innovation in profits and economic growth, some important problems are left behind. For instance, the environment and the planet are in huge danger and if their wan no plans and solutions for these issues, this will lead to economic recession. Furthermore, by addressing social and environmental challenges, businesses can build trust with consumers, and also investing in sustainable practices can lead to cost savings.
In conclusion, while profit and economic growth have historically driven innovation, there is a growing recognition that innovation should also prioritize addressing social and environmental issues. In my opinion, prioritizing social and environmental issues in innovation can contribute to a more equitable, inclusive, and sustainable society leading to more and more economic growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67952522255 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07892351442 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5213208078 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315498715528 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109773849606 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895902839252 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214284895296 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890431941784 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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