Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
These days, we can clearly notice that the whole world has been changing, some people says that to rate the changing you must track the profit and economic growth and other say that it must label the social and environmental issues. In this essay, we will discus the both point of views.
To start with, anything in the world should be driven by seeing its progress in it’s field, to the innovation it should be tracked by seeing it’s profit and economic growth. That’s because the innovation of anything we should see the progress that it has made before and after its upgrading. For example, if you had updated a software program to a new one how can you know that this updating was good or bad, by seeing and calculating the profit that you was making before the update that you have made and after it.
On the other hand, it should says the social and environmental problems that are in the society. Because the best innovation is to change the society into a new good one, in the academic field or any field, you must know the problems in the city and fix it. For example, if their any problems in the roads, academic filed or in the society, you should fix it
In conclusion, there are two ways to rate the progress you made, to calculate the profit you made and the economic growth or to see the social and environmental problems you have fixed. This essays stands with the first view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'in its field'?
Suggestion: in its field
...should be driven by seeing its progress in it’s field, to the innovation it should be tracked...
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Message: Did you mean 'in its field'?
Suggestion: in its field
...should be driven by seeing its progress in it’s field, to the innovation it should be tracked...
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...uld be driven by seeing its progress in it’s field, to the innovation it should be t...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'say'.
Suggestion: say
...after it. On the other hand, it should says the social and environmental problems t...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'stand'.
Suggestion: stand
...al problems you have fixed. This essays stands with the first view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, you know, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50588235294 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29029008671 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462745098039 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6182248508 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156549083893 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746533542376 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571105384706 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102203879499 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198854733732 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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