Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside.
What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Many numbers of people are travelling from outskirts to cities leaving old people. Some people argue that will perorally create a problem due to lack of youth. However, this trial can be solved if the government takes it into consideration.
Unforetunatly, leaving the countryside and moving to the urban lands would most often lead to a decrease in the youth work force; therefore, the production efficiency would fall. If the number of agricultures decreased, the price of groceries would rise because old people usually do not have the same abilities, such as time, as young people. For example, youth people have the ability to farm for a longer respect to old people. As populations, public services such as healthcare, education and transportation may be reduced. This can make it difficult for the elderly population to access necessary services.
Fortunately, it has been a while since the government working on this kind of problems. Governments can provide financial alternatives, such as lower taxes to attract businesses to rural areas. Moreover, Improving Infrastructure: Enhancing transportation, internet connectivity, and public services can make rural living more comfortable. Improved infrastructure can facilitate remote work opportunities and better access to essential services. Establishing training and educational programs in rural areas can help young people with skills that are need. Thuse, this can encourage them to stay their communities after getting the required qualifications.
In conclusion, many challenges are caused by leaving the outskirts, but the government can go after this problem by enhancing the infrastructure and provide more economic opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67843137255 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27930844821 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8719946476 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303459723195 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896131290018 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504451368258 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187941004882 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644968009667 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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