Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside.
What problems are caused by this issue?
What can be done to solve this situation?
The majority of the new generation is moving from the countryside to the big city for a better life, leaving the old people behind in the countryside. In this essay, will learn what problems that brings causes and how to solve them. Firstly, will talk about the disadvantages of this venture and secondly, how to deal with them.
First of all, we must understand that prices in the city will be much higher than in the village. For example, housing, especially in the country's capital, food and all living things are becoming more expensive. And it is very difficult to move there without big savings. In addition, we can also experience loneliness and a lack of companions if we have not found them in advance on the Internet. Finally, all our friends and relatives stayed at the previous place.
On the other hand, the solutions to these problems are quite simple. If we have prospects for a good job and are convinced that we are a specialist, we don't have to worry about the financial component at all. Over time, any relatives and friends may be brought into your home to help them settle. As you can find, dating on social networks based on common interests or even move in with friends and help each other for the first time.
In summary, moving to a big city is a great idea if we are well prepared and have weighed up the pros and cons. Otherwise the move will not lead to anything good and it is not at all worth leaving your relatives alone in old age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in summary, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49438202247 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42994684506 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6834327528 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7142857143 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164246024735 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536428819154 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689904163409 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105940227541 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103481151813 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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