Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people goes with the idea of having a pet for their own children and that’s a good thing to have in your house while either people thing that is too dangerous and an unhealthy thing to have as a child. This essay will discuss the both point of views either it’s healthy to keep a pet or its dangerous and unhealthy.
Having a pet is the most adorable thing the child will have while he is in his first years, Its going to be a good memory that will affect the child’s health and feelings for the rest of his life. also, pets can be a tool to relief your stress as an example, If you are heading home as a child from a very bad day in school and while you are opening your house door you found you own pet waiting for you with a happy smile on his face that’s kind of a relaxing moment. Furthermore, This pets can be your friend till the end of your life.
On the other hand, pets can be dangerous and unhealthy too. pets can have some health issues for their own family if the pet itself has any kind of a disease and that can leads of losing one of the family members. As an example, Their was a case in the news about a family died because of their dog that he had a disease with out any one knowing from the family and that leads to their own death.
We can conclude that having pets without protection can make disasters or it can lead to a healthy life. In my opinion it’s a must to have a pet because you are going to have a loyal friend till the last day of your life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, while, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0303030303 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99576124643 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441077441077 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2588515304 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.7 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241987839633 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111932643545 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739821931283 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156573765337 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999960572492 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.88 50.2224549098 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.69 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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