Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
Technology is the result of accumulated knowledge that allows machines to become more complex. The increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. While it might only make people busier. This essay will discuss how technology affects the development of countries and if it could be an obstacle that inhibits the wheel of development.
Modern technology has the pleasure to solve many problems. According to many fields, when technology is involved, everything will be easier. To illustrate, the smart watch that you can wear can do a lot of things. For health, technology helped in diagnosing many diseases and a lot of cures for them. Technology in the transportation systems made it very easy to cover long distances with little time. Moreover, there are some new machines that do the job in one day in just a few hours. So, the development of any country should be involved with modern technology.
Dealing with a lot of technology could cause some problems. Some people see technology as making life more complicated and undependable. To discuss, people are spending more time using modern technology, social networks and neglecting their real life. In addition, technology makes people use tools and applications like calculators and spelling checkers. This affected the way people use their brains. Furthermore, using computers and the internet makes it easy to find information. This may result in having poor study habits and developing a lazy attitude, so No one would read a book.
To conclude, modern technology brings two different types of use, even in a good and helpful way or in a very horrible and bad way. Developing countries need technology and in all types of fields to help humans. Excessing use of technology is not good for human health and mentality. In my opinion, using technology makes life easier to deal with our modern life and to be able to be with modern countries. But not use it and cancel our brain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. While it might only make people busier. This ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99093655589 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83942594571 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2927834829 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8260869565 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3913043478 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21739130435 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343381615815 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103072864212 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115416619179 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221126651722 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925603800876 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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