Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In society the fact of having pets is always a challenge either for the parents or the children, it can be easy to maintain or can be hard so in this essay we will discuss both opinions, is it delicate for children to have pet’s around or, it can be led to threatened situations.
Having a pet whoever it’s a parrot, monkey sometimes even a rat is fun but for common pets like a dog or a cat is a very regular way to teach children how to take responsibility from a young age and keep them company to the lifespan or even protect them from dangerous situations and go hand in hand, like as if a unfamiliar persons access the house and tried to steal something while the dog is there, the dog will attack , while the burglar run.
Parents can bear a different perspective for these things, a dog or a cat can also be sometimes a risk but in a really rare occasions like a dog or a cat can attempt to be suddenly violent towards its owner they gotta murder it for their safety and to not put their kids in jeopardy, so instead of this apprehension some parents shake off even the thought sometimes , kids have an allergic reaction, from the pets fur.
Theoretically all parents wants what’s best for their kids, whether it can be a common way of teaching and parenting or, preventing their kids from unpredictable danger, both ways it’s for their own safety, comfort and to live in harmony with the nature life. In my opinion, I think that having a pet is important for teaching children how to take care and clarify things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44169611307 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55999961527 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.907568001 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.4 106.682146367 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187781097609 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116952911165 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577625874899 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11567389999 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407024220238 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.56 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.36 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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