Businesses should have social responsibilities besides making money. Agree or disagree?
It is argued that companies should take responsibility for society besides making profit. From my perspective, I agree with this statement.
There are several reasons why businesses should give priority for money. The first reason is that money will help maintain their business. It is easy for companies to be closed down if they do not have revenue, which leads to a large number of unemployed. Another reason is that affluent enterprises contribute to developing a prosperous nation. It can be observed that there are many enormous companies located in the developed country. Therefore, citizens have many opportunities to get a job and increase their standard of living.
Besides the above argument, I believe that companies should put more resources into society. First of all, businesses should be responsible for the environment. This is because during the manufacturing process, factories create many wastes that can cause pollution problems such as air pollution and soil pollution. For instance, the quality of the air in Hanoi city is contaminated significantly due to the emissions from large companies. Secondly, they also should spend some money on education. Every year, the profit that they make is extremely large. Thus, there are many students who can have an opportunity to get an education with their investment. To illustrate, in a remote area of Vietnam, there are many students who can go to school with the assistance of large companies.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above, although making money is important for businesses, I believe that they should be responsible for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hey do not have revenue, which leads to a large number of unemployed. Another reason is that affl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26582278481 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91739123923 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9637781215 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2656426254 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850838605781 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758916983897 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195961312213 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602745470601 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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