Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Online shopping is a modern trend which allows shopping anything like books, air tickets and groceries from your home. I believe, there are an equal amount of merits and demerits in this system. Although purchasing things from the internet reduces our effort, it might develop laziness in humankind, consequently, give rise to several health problems.
Ordering from a cell phone or a laptop has several advantages. Firstly, Shopping gets easier due to this new approach, moreover, plenty of effort is required to purchase a rare item in the traditional way, whereas, the new approach shortens our difficulty as we can order from home. Secondly, it saves a lot of time, for instance, a busy person may not give a required time for shopping in out-dated method, however, shopping online can save a large amount of time. Finally, this new approach allows the one to buy anything which is not available in his locality, to illustrate, Ayurveda medicines are only available in Kerala, while, those can be ordered online.
On the other hand, online shopping has some disadvantages. Smooth availability of everything develops laziness in mankind, that leads to large varieties of health issues like obesity. Although it makes shopping simple, quality of product delivered might be poor. Likewise, Product may not be as expected, to put it in another way, the product is different in the internet image and different in reality.
To conclude, even though shopping from your mobile or laptop by sitting at home is comfortable and effortless, it has an equal number of strengths and weaknesses.
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- Diagram 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...our home. I believe, there are an equal amount of merits and demerits in this system. ...
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Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...es are only available in Kerala, while, those can be ordered online. On the other hand,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14671814672 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76753998883 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1383709203 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134842700609 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465499613928 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370649534168 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784838917903 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452172558197 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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