Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
protection of environment is one among the major Challenges world is facing from many years. although it is a global issue, there are two different views, some argue that developed countries must take charge to fight with climate change. While, others say that every country must have their role in saving our environment. However, as the developed countries are a step ahead of developing countries, they can take initiative in environmental safety. On the other hand, all other countries must also give their hand in protection of nature. In my opinion, every country have to take their responsibility towards protecting the nature.
As developed countries utilize maximum number of resources than developing countries, they are responsible to take responsibility and combat climate changes by planting maximum plants and motivating other countries to follow them. On the other hand, developing countries like india must take their step towards saving our nature because top 20 cities with more air pollution includes most of the Indian cities. Henceforth, every country must show their concern towards environment.
In my opinion, fighting climate change requires individual countries involvement. because , any other developed country cannot be involved in climate change in particular developing country. New Delhi, india is one of the most polluted cities, due to that there is always extreme climate. Moreover, government is trying to reduce pollution by promoting public transport and discouraging private ones.
To conclude, although developed countries have their role in motivating other countries , it is that countries responsibility to implement different policies to reduce pollution and save our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, in particular, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69884169884 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92351977851 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4973683482 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421099540847 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157179039103 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10266378862 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284612212161 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651607117877 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.