Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Environmental problems due to climate changed experienced over decades. It is thought that developed countries should responsible in dealing in this problems rather than third world country, while other believes that equal power should be given to all countries regardless of economic status.
Global warming resulting to climate change has massive impact in nature and humans. Giant countries such as USA, Canada, China, Japan etc., has the authority to combat and manage the crisis worldwide. Moreover, leadership, power, expertise and advance technology are criteria that some population see that developed countries should lead towards protecting and saving the environment, compared to developing countries. On the contrary, due to lack of resources, financial support, modern facility and equipment some people thought these countries are not capable to manage the problem all are facing.
In my perspective, worldwide are experiencing climate change to physical environment, ecosystem and human societies. Additionally, people were exploiting and damaging the bio diversity. Because of soil erosion, deforestation and land degradation, mining, air and land pollution are the factors that lead to damage the ecosystem, in which human are the primary cause. It has major effect on the environment such as habitat destruction, coral bleaching, and extreme weather. On the other hand, it has effects on human migration, flooding of cities and farmland. All these are threats to sustainability.
I believe, regardless of the status of countries, neither rich nor poor countries; everyone should be responsible and accountable on its action. People should be aware the bad effect and to help in this dilemma peoples facing.
In conclusion, awareness and protection in ecosystem to stop climate change will be everyone responsibility, regardless of the country your living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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...regardless of the country your living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, third, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02434847091 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9390602645 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345487938858 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933461656789 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799411935152 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176859315165 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967236521524 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.