Nowadays people from all different age groups use the internet to shop and manage most of their needs. However, some view this increasing trend of people to shop online as something which could pose some threats to the individual and society in general. In my opinion, the benefits and the disadvantages of online shopping should be further discussed.
First and foremost, internet and its various shopping applications present to every person in this world more choices and alternatives in respect of both money and value. No matter the location of the individual nothing is out of reach. Secondly, most people prefer to buy things online because of its simplicity as concept. All you need to do is to fire up your pc or your smart phone and click to what you want. In this way, people do not have to get dressed or move towards the location of the store, and save a lot of time in this way.
On the other hand, the extended use of the internet even for the simplest purchases, is associated a lot of times with anti-social behavior. Some prefer to avoid the day to day communication with their peers and to remain socially distanced at their home. In addition, buying or selling goods remotely is not always the best choice for two reasons. Firstly, there are products such as clothes that would be better to try them before you purchase them. Secondly, there have been lots of reports of cases of fraud through the internet, where customers have been deceived and bought goods which did not exist.
In conclusion, I believe that online shopping has brought lots of positive developments in our societies. Although instances of fraudulent use of the internet are alarming, we can not deny how much internet has helped us to expand our choices and to save extra time. We should encourage its use, as well as the introduction of new controls and security measures that will minimize any possible threat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79696969697 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5679185527 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6441789185 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175883769389 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488310736972 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431061315046 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962890939804 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582258675959 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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