Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
On the one hand, there are many advantages of shopping online. Firstly, purchasing things on the Internet is much less time-
consuming for people who are full of time, especially. Instead of running to store and finding the desire products, people can
browse them on website and pay immediately to get those products. Moreover, the amount of carbon dioxide, which is
emitted from automobiles, can be reduced significantly. Secondly, shopping in this way also helps consumers to compare the
products’ price in the fattest way. By being able to open as many as website buyers need, they can consider which or where
the products’ price is the lowest.
On the other hand, shopping online also has some disadvantages. The first point is the quality of products. Customers can
easily compare the prices between stores but quality neither. To more clearly, the goods are bought with the cheapest price
compare to all other stores, but there is nothing to ensure that the products are exactly similar to what purchasers wanted
to buy. Another point is network. There is no doubt that online shopping needs Wi-Fi or network. Without them, people
can not buy anything through Internet.
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... way also helps consumers to compare the products' price in the fattest way....
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...also helps consumers to compare the products' price in the fattest way. By being abl...
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...Fi or network. Without them, people can not buy anything through Internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30256410256 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66587759529 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0799408284 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5384615385 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104515847002 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352106433834 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336113275626 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039895665622 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037167499537 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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