Capital punishment or death penalty is a debatable practice.In many countries it is valid while others consider it inhuman and are against it.what are your views?
The word 'Law' refers to a legal system of the country provide by government of the country. Govenment make various laws for the betterment of their citizens. To run a country effectively, it is neccessary to have a strong yet feasible law system.
All countries have their different laws.one of the law is death penalty. All countries possess this law but impletations are different. It is good to give death punishmint to one who has done such seroius offensive crime such as, murder, rape, molestation and all. But it is not good to give death punishment to one who has done crimes like robbabry, blackmail, burglary and all.
Death punishment should be given for some crimes only not for all crimes. For example, in my country India, a terrorist named Ajmal kasab was hanged to death in 2012 for his terrorist activity which is good. He deserved death penalty. On the other hand, in Gulf countries even a robberer also liable for death penalty which is not good. It is inhuman.
There should be a criteria for death penalty. Not every criminals are liable for death penalty. Definately not a robbarer liable for death penalty. Law is a cure to every crimes. But at same time, it should not be so harsh. Criminals who have done robbary, fraud, blackmail all that activities should be given a chance.
In synopsis, i feel that there should be a liable punishments for every crimes. Death penalty is not only option for all crimes. Yet it is neccessary to those who has done such serious offensive activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77566539924 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58513752001 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48288973384 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 31.6522344484 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8095238095 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5238095238 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123135267144 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514963035584 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436839618079 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754438328139 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380432734381 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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