In the globalisation, a men his transformed his life very tremendously . As the world is growing, people's demands area touching to the sky. As the individuals have lack of time; they are preferring easy mode of travelling and car is one of them . Increasing number of vehicles causing a long queues on the roads that trigger off abundant problems not only to human life but also to environment. Hence before embarking on any solutions i shall explore my ideas in following paragraphs.
To commence with, nowadays, we can see often there are multi types of car companies which are providing number of benefits to people, such as new models of cars, extra facilities, low instalments. So, it became easier for the customer to buy a new car. A survey has been conducted by Hindustan Times, in which 70% of peoples are buying new cars from the last ten years, the reasons behind that, is to easy financial process to be a owner of new car. In addition, who are going from one city to another city, they are preferring same vehicle because of easy, faster and comfortable mode of travelling as well.
Probing ahead, it is certainly true that, number of vehicles lead to different problems. Firstly, time wastage is one of the most effect, that cause trouble to people. For instance, waiting for long time cause disturbance in time management. Furthermore, number of cars means occurrence of air and noise pollution lead to imbalance in atmosphere and this factor can can cause physical illnesses to people.
There is no doubt in saying this, the same factor is responsible for for many problems but government can create awareness in individuals regarding use of public transportation as well. Furthermore, those companies should be banned who providing car loans. Other measures, such as seminars and counselling should be arranged by government bodies, which aware the people about advantages of public transport and how people can protect themselves from burden of vehicles loan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82849608709 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3207703715 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116047262058 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348289238328 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330289342172 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667499069284 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183219287518 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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