The diagram below shows the process of making a water clock.
The given pictorial chart illustrates the information about procedure of creating water clock with the help of essential apparatuses. The presentation showing information clearly and coherently.
To begin with, the water clock has been made by using several equipments such as two plastic bottles, stand, tape, glue, straw and tap for the water. These all ornaments work according to their functionality.
At starting step, two plastic bottles has been taken and two holes are done on first bottle for different purposes. A tap is available for water, needed for whole process. At first, the bottle has fixed with stand with the help of tape. After that, a straw is stuck in hole that is, on neck of bottle from which, water is rinsing just to prevent overflow of water.
Then , placing a finger on surface hole of bottle, until water is not filled properly. Then after, remove finger and water is getting poured into without head bottle, which is situated on surface of stand. Following this, accumulation of water should be measured according to minutes. At final, emptying the bottle and repeat the whole process again for the desirable results.
In conclusion, the particular process required several instruments and different levels to create a water clock.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17475728155 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61508432239 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5509565602 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218672998267 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800089127471 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595913947492 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136381445776 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403294733286 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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