Most people would agree to this that car ownership has increased steadily in recent years, and this is causing of many problems have been produced. Particularly in build up areas. There are number of solution that government has to be need to implement this ideas to decrease the purchasing and using of personal fourwheelers.
Nowadays, the number of people are jobholders or working. whereas, most of these are like to survive on personal vehicles, and this is the main reason of many problems, such as, traffic congestion and pollution. Apart from that, these are the major cause of health related ailments like skin problem, asthma, breathing and so on. Contrary to this, many people like to survive on own vehicles. Because they think that journey on personal vehicles is more effective and full of offensive safety. Personally speaking, this is the main reason of increasing number of cars.
Moving further, there are a number of solution to mend this problem. First and foremost is public transport, government should need to start up a superior transport. It would also possible to implement some laws related with car cost. If person is likely to buy Fourwheelers, he/she will be need to pay advance tax or extra payment. the best epitome of this is that, decision would be taken by the regime related with limited hours are limited kilometres will become very beneficial to discourage people for using their cars.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors while, it not be possible to find a complete solution of this problem. But, this could be probably solving by authority. they can solve this problem with the help of advertisement, and counselling to tell the pros related with public transportation, and cons related with personal cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, whereas, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05821917808 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70120826367 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9939634552 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184129664586 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620535245888 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495055836009 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123579051874 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425178052586 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.