Nowadays, A Heavy rush hour traffic has been rising specially in contemporary cities and it stems from increasing the amount of car manufacturing products as well as dropping a usage of public transportation. In this essay both problems and solutions will be noticed.
First and foremost, it stands to reason that producing plenty of cars and lacking of regulation on them leads sky scraper’s city go in a big trouble. For instance, heavy traffic, polluted air and even rising the amount of car accidents. Nevertheless, youths are willing to use personal vehicle instead of public transportation such as bus, train, etc. Going under the surface, lack of communication roads put a strain on large cities and be a main reason among this unpleasant circumstance. Specially, devoid of knowledge about how traffic jam could have a harmful effect on citizen’s health give rise to increasing the consumption of fossil fuels as well as be subjected by gas’s emissions.
Government plays a principal role toward this solution. Furthermore, contribution of both government and citizens would be better and even more effective in this subject to be tackled. Moving on to youths, They have an impact responsibility among this situation by diminishing the usage of personal vehicles and lead theirselves to public transportations. This solution give rise to even their children to build their behavior and improving the sense of distinguishing which one is more effective on reducing traffic jams. On the other hand, government can provide a suitable scheme in which car’s plate will be separated by odd and even and make a permission on each of them to use separately in week days.
Overall, either governments or subjects should holds their hands together in order to solve every single circumstances. Time management should be done by people and it wouldn’t be reachable unless we changed our behaviors throughout this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31067961165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1842884156 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7010246756 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206276823064 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703322403745 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332026406338 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123739258802 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315363593925 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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