Technology is intensifying day to day and helping human beings in various fields. Though it is beneficial yet flaws of contemporary technological things exist as purchases of cars by individuals are adding on continuously from last three decades which is leading to a sole humongous traffic jam. I will not only discuss that to what extent this notion is affecting our world but also recommend some panaceas to high authorities in forthcoming paragraphs.
Indeed, it is a fact, motor vehicles are affecting this world detrimentally nevertheless, concerned authorities are not paying much attention towards this issue. Moving further towards its effects, first of all, noxious gases are harming environment emitting from cars and leading folks to face hazardous ailments related to heart. For instance, Delhi, India, is the most polluted city in India because of highest car owners. Apart from this, hurdles are coming in the path of emergency vehicles due to high traffic such as ambulance which can pave the way to one’s death. In addition to this, because of horns installed in vehicles, various birds, animals plus workers get disturb from their work. Ergo, inclement in cars is affecting badly human’s daily life.
To initiate with solutions, government could embolden large organisations to launch more hybrid cars in order to get rid of pollution as well as noise. To exemplify, KIA is a hybrid car which operates on battery. Furthermore, instead of banning all cars from roads, concerned authorities could inaugurate some policies in which only two quarters cars could move on roads and vice versa to two remaining quarters cars.
It can be concluded that motor vehicles could not be vanished away completely from roads however, implementation of some constraints could be done by government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...the most polluted city in India because of highest car owners. Apart from this, hurdles ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30902777778 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86774236587 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7728847853 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155795224551 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541041667298 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228831045513 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08306298694 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431819908951 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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