The past time of thirty years until the present days, thanks to the invention of advanced technology with industrial development, there are a high quantity of cities where people interested in using private cars instead of employing public transport. So now we’re facing a problematic issue in the metropolitan area. And I completely agree with statement.
Firstly, there are numerous reasons which lead to traffic congestion. These days, science is developing and with new techniques that can easily manufacture modern cars, so that residents can afford cars on their own without taking much cash in place of traveling public vehicles. Beside that, being the owner of a high price car will show your eminence and caste. In addition, public transports have a limited route and schedule, so it’s very inconvenient when people want to go to an intended place. So the more cars appear, the more traffic jams occurs
Secondly, the government should deploy some solutions to stop people using or purchasing cars, for instance, increasing tax and complex procedure of registration on ownerships that decrease people’s intention to use their own cars. Aside from that, The government could renovate and upgrade the system of public transport. Moreover, organizing campaign residents to walk or hang out by bike to reduce traffic jams, who walk out or use bikes can have vouchers or gifts, traveling general vehicles without taking cash.
In short, the period of modern ages, technic cars are operating by residents in cities are rising day by day which means that, traffic jams will also up, but we can create methods to encourage people to stop using cars and clean up this problem.
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars Give reasons 78
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 78
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
The past time of thirty years until the present days,...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ars appear, the more traffic jams occurs Secondly, the government should deploy s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18248175182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63695665728 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7317595379 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29282024876 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09091146709 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529714167431 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163250333513 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117182468178 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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