Caring for children is important in any society. All parents should be required to take childcare courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children are new generations in society, thus they are deserved to be cared properly. The question of whether all parents should be required to take childcare course or not remains a resource of controversy. In my opinion, I totally agree with the idea that it is compulsory for all parents to learn class how to take care their child, even this should be a law enacted by the government.
Firstly, it will better prepare them for the tough job of parenting as child bearing is always not an easy task. By attending parenting classes, parents will know how to manage stress and what to do when they are at the breaking point, so preventing child abuse. Moreover, parenting responsibility on each growth periods of children are extremely critical. For example, parents who educated about parenting will know how to discipline teenagers, thus there will be less teen pregnancy, drug, and alcohol use, violence, bullying, sexing and juvenile crime. Consequently, our society will save a number of budgets for solving problems exerted by children, which stem from lacking child care.
Secondly, children who present for our hope and future are the most important citizens in all over the world. That is a reason why they need to be raised properly by their parents who are a master of that job in order to enhance their abilities all-rounded. For example, many parents allow their child or teenager to use internet their bedroom, and not in an open area where everyone can walk by and look. That can result in the child contacting internet predators cyber bullying, posting nude photos online and viewing pornography. However, parenting classes will give parents advice on internet safety or other aspects.
In sum, taking care of children should be considered as the most important profession in the world which applicants are all parents. I suppose that not only children by also their parents have benefited from that parenting course. As a results, our society will be better and better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...they are deserved to be cared properly. The question of whether all parents should be required to take ...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...enefited from that parenting course. As a results, our society will be better and better....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i suppose, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00301204819 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62452084533 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7936250434 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340509074379 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115481901054 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771412973068 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229739321716 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952835364024 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.