Parents should choose childcare training because in today's life caring for child is a vital responsibility in every community. I totally agree with this notion. The reasons for my agreement along with my opinion are in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, parents can learn many things by going to childcare training centres by interacting with other parents presented their at the training centre and can also discuss methods related to childcare. Apart from this, childcare centre provides pamphlets consisting of tips related to teaching basic responsibilities to the pupils. For instance, a study by "Care Takers" stated that 80% parents are pleased with the tips provided the the childcare training centres.
Furthermore, by attending chilcare courses and visiting childcare centres parents can learn many things related to childcare and it will prevent parents from appointing a babysitter and as a result it saves money. Also, it can reduce their stress because reduction in the household expenses due to cutting off babysitter expense. For example, a report by World Health Organisation illustrated that household expenses are liable for 20% of stress problems in a human body.
In conclusion, choosing childcare training course will aid parents to learn more information related to childcare and can also saves money. As per my perspective, parents should opt going to childcare centres and should attend childcare coures rather than appointing nannies.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57268722467 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88908203564 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555066079295 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2179967088 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180260931815 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785671523085 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392133564862 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125391651384 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342979622841 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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