Certain personal qualities can not be achieved through university studies.Do you agree or disagree with it ? Give your opinion and relevant example.
In recent time,there is ongoing debate between people about some specific personal qualities.Many people believe that it can not be achieved through schooling or university studies.I however stand with the statement and my argument is supported further in ensuring paragraphs.
First, it commence with there are myriad qualities which can not grown while studying in university.First and foremost is honesty.It can not be achieved by university.To illustrate,when person work any companies or person for long lasting time,it is a symbol of honesty.In addition,more quality is flexibility.To examplify,it can be achieved by doing all kind of work and it can also earn by good communication skill.When people are good in communication it is emblem of person can mix in situation or people.
Another pivotal reason for my bending is problem solving skill.When person stuck in any bad situation,how they can solve or handle that situation,it can not tought in university.Moreover, trust play vital role in personal qualities.When person are trustful than people have more trust on them.For example,one person working in company,he is trustful person.so,he has more probability to get good salary as well as overall development.
I pen down by reiterating my perception that there are many attributes which can not tought by university studies.My personal opinion is that some plethora qualities can not be get in university studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56621004566 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43146963283 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.758983241 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 304.75 106.682146367 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.75 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.75 7.06120827912 365% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302593809597 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196015113084 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627522646206 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196015113084 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627522646206 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.0946893788 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 50.2224549098 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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