The charts depict three kinds of nutrients taken by Americans for typical meals. People consume different amounts of nutrients in their meals.
Firstly, most sodium is eaten at dinner, over 43 per cent. Besides, nearly 3 in 10 of them will be consumed for lunch. Only 14 per cent of sodium is taken in at breakfast, the same as at snacks. They are less than one-third of the dinner. Secondly, saturated fat is taken in more balanced during a day. The dinner takes the majority of it, occupying about 37 per cent. The lunch fell behind it by 26 per cent. Speaking of Added sugar, Americans take in most of it with snacks, leaving about half to another three meals. At dinner, people usually take in 23 per cent of added sugar.
In conclusion, Americans had better make some changes in their diets. They take in too many nutrients from snacks. especially the added sugar. Also, maybe they should reduce the consumption of dinner and eat more at lunch and breakfast.
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant https www 56
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 73
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...take in too many nutrients from snacks. especially the added sugar. Also, maybe they shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, in conclusion, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67251461988 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34214724247 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2051698555 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.2666666667 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0643340031554 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245147909228 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365411319343 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622614190205 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385177391413 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.0946893788 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.62 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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