the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The diagrams compare the proportion of the various purposes of water usage in six regions of the Earth.
Overall, water used in agriculture is by far the most popular function in the world shown on the charts and water used homely is the lowest figure. Also, developed areas tend to use more water in industrial development.
Over 80% of water is consumed in farming in Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia, almost 10% higher than the amount of South America. These figures are nearly two times as high as in North America and Europe. Such dramatic differences also are seen in industrial development in North America and Europe, at about 48% and 53% respectively, almost 38% - 50% higher than in other areas.
Water used in homely is the lowest figure in Europe, North America, Africa, approximately 15%, 19%, and 13%. Residential water usage is second-highest in Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia, slightly 2-5% higher than using in industry.
- The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101 61
- The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features Write at least 150 words 56
- The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 2012 67
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news However others believe that they can get news better through another media Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6512894858 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4979010536 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222960117097 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101193871779 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789668488057 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14801107577 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907541031482 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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