It is widely believed that parents ought to be required to participating in childcare educating courses. From my point of view, I partly agree with this perspective because some adults can take care of their children by their own way to promote their children development.
It can be denied that joining childcare training lessons would bring more positive effects on the development in terms of health and brain of the offspring. Firstly, when parents are educated about nutrition courses, balance diets and diseases, they have a tendency to adjust and change the choices of food and beverage which are better for their children's health. Besides, for the children's sake, parents also encourage them taking part in physical training courses or taking up helpful hobbies. Secondly, once the physical health is protected and boosted, children brain's function may be improved. Instead of only studying at schools with normal subjects, children have a chance to interact or leaning with their parents through IQ, EQ lessons at home. To do that, parental training plays a decisive role.
On the other hand, learning how to educate children should not be mandatory for all parents because of these reasons below. If parents, who are enough knowledge and patience, are able to applying their creative ways to connect and look after their children. At this situation, they no need to use available repeatable lessons, which can lead to dull and stress atmosphere among parents and children. Moreover, parental lessons achieve a large proportion in monthly budget, saving this money for future purposes is also a good way to invest in the promotion of their offspring.
In conclusion, participating in childcare training courses is one of the important methods to take care of children, parents had better consider other factors to make a decision to join or not.
Votes
Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: jasu
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17275747508 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64447653517 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8566959621 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236276291432 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09035542316 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525751939722 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141745104961 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266241742271 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.