In recent years, it has been incresingly common to see children becoming obese in many countries. There are several justifications for this trend and some effective solutions should be implemented to deal with it.
There are a number of compelling reasons related to this trend. Firstly, nowaday children have a unhealthy diet. With incresing popularity of fast food, children are essy tempted to consume it. As we know that fast food really high in fats, sugar anf salt, such as fried chicken, chips, hamburger,... That is the reason why eat excessive portions fast food can lead to overweigh.
The second reason of childhood obesity is children lead a sedentary lifestyle. Doing exercise is play an important role in prevention many diseases including obesity. But after a long time at studying, they stick their eyes to the screen or play game instead of take part in activities out door. And the results is they do not burn calories so it will accumulate and cause obesity.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Diamondpham97
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9756097561 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70456902939 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731707317073 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8094679569 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.1818181818 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133826273177 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456218137001 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043989595298 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921900329017 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591796486108 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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