Children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case? How should children be punished?
Recently, there are more incidents of crimes committed by minors. I will give some possible reasons for this issue and propose some suggestions to deal with these juvenile lawbreakers.
The major reason for the increasing number of young criminal offenders may be the changing social structure in the current society. To be more specific, the younger generations are more likely to live in families where both parents need to work full-time in order to support the family financially. As a result, the children from these backgrounds tend to have less parental control, or even totally neglected by their caregivers, thus making it easier for them to go astray. Another plausible reason may include the exposure to violence on the mass media, which is making breaking law a “fashionable” behavior. The primary incentive for them to conduct their criminal acts is to follow the latest trend.
With regard to the punishments to the delinquent acts done by teenagers, I think putting them into correctional institutions and community services are the better options. The motive for giving this advice is that the youngsters can have the opportunity to rehabilitate by taking moral and law lessons provided by the institutions. Once they are taught and made aware of the consequences of breaking the laws, the possibility of recommitting a crime will be lowered. By doing community service, these children will have the chance to reform and repay the society as well.
In conclusion, teenagers’ anti-social behaviors can be reduced if the parents and the society are giving more care and proper guidance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'with regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226480836237 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.177700348432 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0940766550523 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0383275261324 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0313588850174 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101045296167 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0627177700348 0.0403226058552 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0541394733 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0487804878049 0.0326793684256 149% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.128919860627 0.0861772015684 150% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243902439024 0.021408717616 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00696864111498 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1620.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25482625483 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397683397683 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301158301158 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223938223938 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146718146718 0.137316102897 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0541394733 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 66.0246024733 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5833333333 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3955586805 49.517814964 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 127.492653851 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 51.6991634492 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.57746478873 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264722377764 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112986058707 0.102741220458 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0658988939432 0.0668466124924 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.639803092676 0.534860350844 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134689730069 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120381014073 0.134430193775 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497872336559 0.0742795772207 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313722191587 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.165274509138 0.0638462369009 259% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18256453239 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565582117981 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9