Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is true that, students are undergoing severe stress in terms of education, public and in the field of trades as well. However, the main reason behind this problem is parents make, over consciousness towards their children because many families are reduces to nuclear families with one or two children to the core. Owing to the fact that, the main solution to solve this pressure by psychological support to the kids and behavioural therapy to the parents to some extent.

On the one hand, the rising number of small families make every one to be best at any cost in all levels not only in school grades but also in front of public as a hero or heroine. Earlier, every family has many children and each one has specific qualities to become prominent and parents concentration neither to the single child nor to whole family members. For instance, students are insisted to go for arts and sports section to participate without considering their taste and push them into special classes to get scholarships, a main student Counselor explain in Daily reports. Furthermore, new parents who fail to get a chance become a scholar or graduate in their past would be an another kind of problem makers in new generations to be under stress. They often think that not to be like them because of the limitations of measures and resources,

To tackle such issues, there are many ways are elaborating collectively in recent years like effective lectures and counselling services. Couples must participate joint classes to understand a good parenting techniques before getting pregnant if possible. Make use of such instructions to help parents to be free with the kids and flourish their inner capability to be a man which may lead to a good fellow on their own ability. In addition, school faculty to conduct good seminar or classes to the students who is facing such inner conflicts and provide good care and support to reduce stress. For example, many facts behind the behavioural problem of the students are lightened by student counselling during the seminars.

In conclusion, getting stressed from the toddler time would be detrimental effect on to the society in many ways. A proper support for the whole family would be reduce this problem in some extent

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 687, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a kind' or 'another kind'.
Suggestion: a kind; another kind
...olar or graduate in their past would be an another kind of problem makers in new generations to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93963254593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68240442545 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543307086614 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2557809111 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.428571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2142857143 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848814359423 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299791063528 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233803852925 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569466179519 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017357001248 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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