Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes and of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
It is commonly believed that children in present time are academically, socially and commercially pressurised. This essay intends to discuss the causes of these pressures along with compatible solutions in few words.
Firstly, children are facing numerous academic pressures these days. Today’s child is not only competing with his peer next door or even of one’s town or country, but also competing with child of global village. Parents want their children to excel in every field; therefore, they send their wards in the best schools where they have to carry bulky bags containing a wide range of books of different academic subjects. Even they have to attend private tuitions apart from school studies, which leads extravagant pressure.
Secondly, in addition to academic, social and commercial pressure is also surging at alarming rate for children. Most children are forced to stick with traditional culture, whereas children show more interest in global culture. As a result, sometimes few young one’s rebel against the rules laid by their elders. Finally, commercial pressure is also built by their guardians on children of today due to increasing materialism among the society. Every parent enforces them to be more competitive in order to ensure job security and luxurious life style.
However, the first useful step to overcome this situation is that teachers and parents should work together, and they should teach both competition and co-operation simultaneously. The aim of the competition should not be to win at any cost, instead they must be taught to accept defeats with grace as well. Another handy approach is changes in traditional style of gaining education. These changes include teaching the students according the specific subjects they are interested despite emphasizing all academic subjects. It will definitely lessen the academic and commercial influences.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, children are under numerous pressures in today’s world. However, by developing positive attitude towards competition and making important changes in educational system, their innocent childhood can be protected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8701314118 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6833295472 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248971312311 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079851928652 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799762579208 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138843645745 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562613668363 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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