As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.
What are the main differences between young children's behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
There is no denying that the transition stage from teenagers to adults plays a pivotal role in mankind life. At this stage, however, the actions of children become noticeably different. This essay will not only list the dominant differences between the behavior of adolescences and youngsters but also express my perspective about these changes.
There are a plethora of discrepancies about actions and thinking between children and adults. First, since the minds of teenagers are not improved completely, they are likely to be disobedient and think on a deliberate basis. That means, they usually behave in crucial ways or make wrong mistakes which are essential to their life such as leaving school to pursue entertainment. Second, by being aware the world outside, adolescents become curious about some sensitive aspects such as sexual or criminal aspects. Indeed, it is easy for them to do some incorrect or wicked actions which impact negatively on society such as outlaw, having a baby at juvenile age, and so on.
Regarding differences I mentioned, I believe that these changes have both pros and cons. In terms of its advantages, these changes are an inevitable part of life, by the way, the teenager will learn how to live a life dedicated to self-complete. In fact, by encountering this stage, they consider a problem more carefully and strive to avoid wrong actions when they are adults. However, If they are not aware how to be a good citizen from this stage, definitely, they will repeat it again. As a consequence, there is a burden for society with failed, unambitious people.
In conclusion, the way of acting and thinking is the main differences and these changes bring both merits and demerits to society and the life of everyone.
- As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.What are the main differences between young children's behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good? 67
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- The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06206896552 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80016986065 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6634179984 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135740271855 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488835005094 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425826552095 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855473391815 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120173258401 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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