‘Children do not respect their parents and teachers as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society’. Discuss
It is a global issue that children’s behaviors and codes of conduct have become deviant and worse within a few past decades. There are many running reasons to explain this trend, but big steps could be certainly taken to radically address them.
Regarding the root causes leading to the distortion of young people’s behaviors. There are two decisive factors in this pernicious situations. As the foremost, modern parents tend to be lenient, permissive and even indulge their children’s undue requests. As the prime example, in some Asian countries, with the parental pampering, many children are used to getting as their likings easily/ within their hand, and they become stubborn and disobey their teachers’ demands or school regulations. In addition, suppose that the student’s norms of social behavior are not properly directed, the educational quality and classroom management must be considered and assessed. Needless to say, their mistakes are not promptly handled. This will adversely impact upon the collective environment.
Student’s behaviors and attitudes could be greatly bettered with good cooperation of homing and schooling environment. As the matter of fact, these lopsided changes begin with the parental irresponsibility and ignorance. Therefore, the parent should set some strict home rules and impart many morally sound values for the latter generation. When the children-misbehave and violate the social norms, the caretaker should impose some reasonable punishments to deter their offspring from re-offending. Besides that, the Michigan University conducted a survey and revealed that school leaders play the sterling role in directing and guiding both teachers and parents in the use of effective discipline technique. Preferably, they should closely observe student’s activities o urgently detect wrong behaviors to address appropriately.
In short, the younger generation is the firm basis for national advances, so it is required that the right link between families and school to build moral spirit and standard behavior for the youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70739549839 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95566786692 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649517684887 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6923559447 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183447601613 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527308983206 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472770991601 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945376631635 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689488144919 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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